Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Five Stanzas

One
Ripple in the water
Sunshine on the ground

Two
Flowers in the garden
Needles in the mound

Three
Kittens in the kitchen
Children in the tree

Four
Puddles on the sidewalk
Freckles on my knee

Five
Fingers on my right hand
Stanzas in this poem

4 comments:

  1. You are really good at rhyming.:) I love how it ends with the five fingers and the five stanzas, very clever!

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  2. This isn't like most writings i read, but i found it very interesting and good!

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  3. This is definitely different, but in a good way.

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  4. Its different and I really like it!

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